27th Apr 2015, 12:17 PM in Chapter 2
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NuclearLoop 27th Apr 2015, 12:17 PM edit delete
Nobody likes u Walter go to bed *sad mlg horn*

Welp that's it for chapter 2! I'd like to thank all of my readers once again for sticking by and supporting, it means more to me than you know. I know this was a rickety chapter, but I guess that's going to happen especially when I'm still learning and I still am pretty satisfied with the end result even so!

Like last chapter any and all feedback is seriously appreciated! If you'd like to critique just this chapter or the story as a whole feel free, my only request is that critique leads to how I can improve myself in the future versus just "I thought it was great!!!1!" (Instead explain WHY do you think it's great so I know what I'm doing right? And vise versa pff)

So now Archibald will be on just a mini hiatus, I'm gonna wait for some feedback and make some edits to the script as well as revise some dialogue from Ch2. I plan on getting back into the swing of things by my summer break which starts May 7th, so you can probably expect a cover page by.. I'd say the week following so the 11th or 18th. I really want to start a buffer, so if I decide to hunker down and attempt that there may just be a little longer prolonged hiatus but I assure you I will be back >:I

Again, thank you ALL for reading!!



sketchdoll 27th Apr 2015, 8:28 PM edit delete reply
First of all, I thought this chapter was great! Ha! Seriously, though, it was great. You do an awesome job at character expressions. I love it. I think you just need to keep on doing what you are doing, because it is obviously working! Can't wait to see where the story is heading :D
NuclearLoop 28th Apr 2015, 1:35 AM edit delete reply
Thank you :'D
Tom 27th Apr 2015, 9:13 PM edit delete reply
Why would they go to bed after ransacking a party? Good art but poorly written. C-
NuclearLoop 28th Apr 2015, 12:53 AM edit delete reply
Thank you for your honesty, I've been made aware of a lot of the logical flaws throughout this chapter and I'm going to try my best to write and organize things better in chapters to come.
Reaper Dragon 10th May 2015, 3:30 AM edit delete reply
Reaper Dragon
I disagree. It shows they are different from humans, which they are. This also helps with thought process of the characters being shown, I mean, if they were human then telling others could have helped with potential reprisals over night etc
What I don't get is why they didn't plan on grabbing them before they entered.
CoolCoyote 30th Apr 2015, 3:38 PM edit delete reply
You want us to tell you how we thought you did? 0.0 that is brave >:3

I actually enjoyed the comic so far a lot. good art and the story is still starting out so i do not have much to add in that reguard.

I remember you saying that you didnt like the page after the heroes rescue right before they hop on the tams and escape.

I think that might be because Madrid made her first serious comment with out a wise crack or her ususl half deranged smile :3 basically it was slighty out of character. But who am I to say how the writers own characters should act XD and i would not have noticed until you mentioned it ^.^

The only actual request I have is that you keep the comic pg -pg13. There are literally thousands of comics drenched in vulgarities, sex and gore and quite honestly there isnt much left for people like me to read who want an exciting and good story with out it turning R rated or so innocent it can be labled educational XD

But again, its your story and what you do with it is up to you :3
NuclearLoop 30th Apr 2015, 5:28 PM edit delete reply
Ahaha well, knowing what my readers think is very important to me!

But hey I'm really happy to hear you've enjoyed it thus far! And actually the comic is PG13 :D I don't plan on any blood and gore or F bombs or anything pff. I think I marked the comic for violence and language but it's never going to be super extensive. So I can promise you it's SFW if that's what you're concerned about :'D
CoolCoyote 1st May 2015, 3:25 AM edit delete reply

Well in that case we need to see madrid using a jet pack. Why? Because...reasons.
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 31st May 2015, 6:55 PM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
Nice work. Almost feels like watching Gargoyles. :D